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Phantom Mark Unseen   Nov 11 01:00 UTC 1999

Phantom in the darkness
Paper coated misery
here is the prophecy
that i cant stop to see

Phantom hides, among the shadows
wings of purple, rescue me.
Blinded here. i can see 
Hope and mercy have set me free

Look inside and you shall see
What i havebecome to be
Phantom hiding, here to see
Just what will become of me.
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ponder
response 1 of 1: Mark Unseen   Jan 12 02:31 UTC 2000

interesting meter and rhythm in this one.  Intended?
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