Grex Poetry Conference Item 139

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ball rolling...

Nov 4 13:01 UTC 1999

Hi, I was just wondering where all the poetry was?
I'm a 1st year, comp.sci. major @ Auckland University, New Zealand.
Ok, I'll just make one up...
----Forget It: by redanjel----
I called out. You broke down.
funny how, I was wrong.
I moved out. You fell down.
laugh. The irony of lost love, found.
It doesn't matter, I stopped you for a reason,
but in your eyes I found my answer...
You miss me. And I don't care.So think again.
Bitch.

4 responses total.

ponder

response 1 of 4:

Nov 5 02:38 UTC 1999

Wow.  This piece sounds so violently angry.  

Good job.

toking

response 2 of 4:

Nov 5 09:51 UTC 1999

slick...very slick

rolls a bit too fast to be so short...but well executed all the same

redanjel

response 3 of 4:

Nov 5 12:52 UTC 1999

cheers. *lol, it was about 3am when I wrote it, and the first thing
that came to mind was my last girlfriend...but I'm the one who screwed things
up, but being male--couldn't blame myself for my own mistakes :) That's the
violent part of it. it's short & fast cos I fell asleep :)

ponder

response 4 of 4:

Nov 5 18:20 UTC 1999

Don't worry about it.  The great thing about Poetry Conf is that you can 
change your material (albeit not the original, but still...)

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