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dea
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My Body is a Castle
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Jul 14 10:26 UTC 1999 |
My Body is a Castle
My body is a castle
each room a memory
some lit
some dreary
passeges between always quiet and dark
full with there hidden traps that once sprung leave a mark
My body is a castle
each wing a arm
used as a shield
when wished harm
when wished to write i use there towers
for from them come my creative powers
My body is a castle
the gate my mouth
from where wich my messenger departs
to spread my word to others souls and hearts
My body is a castle
the walls are my spirit
which begins to crumble
when harsh words come near it
My body is a castle
the hearth my heart
which touches others with hope
to help start there fire.
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dea
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response 1 of 7:
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Jul 14 10:29 UTC 1999 |
Hrm. well i got around to it
this was the first poem i ever wrote, back when i was 9
it is my fav by far, but i do not know why, its isnt all that good
and i have writeen many many more which must be better by far i would belive,
but this one has always just held a speacil part in my heart
As you can notice it just kinda ends, i couldnt finish it and for some
reason didnt want to so i left it this way and im still proud of it:)
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toking
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response 2 of 7:
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Jul 14 13:07 UTC 1999 |
welcom t the poetry conf dea
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dea
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response 3 of 7:
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Jul 14 13:08 UTC 1999 |
thanx:) about time i got around to it, i just spent 6 hours reading all the
poems from #1 in 95 to now, boy do we have talent, allthough im sad we lost so
many of them
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dea
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response 4 of 7:
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Jul 14 13:32 UTC 1999 |
by reading them all and the answers given, i got to learn something about all
of'em like they were my friends, some are but most ive never talked to, such a
errie feeling:) almost like seeing ghosts
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orinoco
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response 5 of 7:
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Jul 14 15:02 UTC 1999 |
Yeah, welcome to poetry.
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gypsi
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response 6 of 7:
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Jul 14 17:52 UTC 1999 |
Wow...I really liked that. I guess you didn't really need anything to rhyme
with "mouth". You're dead. ;-)
<gypsi was in party past her bedtime trying to help Damon with that line>
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dea
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response 7 of 7:
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Jul 14 21:33 UTC 1999 |
well i wanted to finsh that one part i never could when i first wrote it and it
was the only part that bugged me:P. i still didnt get it done the way i wanted
it done
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