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pain
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Blind betrayel
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Jul 9 18:11 UTC 1999 |
This light above me
The ground below
The truth blinds me
What it is I do not know
This wall infront of me
Blocking my path
Bordom plagues me
Inspiring its wrath
This dagger hurts me
The wielder turns away
This anger burns me
I have gon astray
This pain stabs me
I grasp my heart
My rage betrays me
Tearing me apart
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pain
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response 1 of 5:
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Jul 9 18:14 UTC 1999 |
It seems a bit quiet around these parts so I decided to dip into some of my
lesser works. Maybe with some help I can finish/fix them.
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dea
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response 2 of 5:
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Jul 14 09:56 UTC 1999 |
yet more happyness i see:)
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flem
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response 3 of 5:
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Jul 20 15:43 UTC 1999 |
hmm.... <flem has an idea...>
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freedom
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response 4 of 5:
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Dec 7 06:58 UTC 1999 |
simple, yet nice
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ponder
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response 5 of 5:
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Jan 12 02:06 UTC 2000 |
The rhythm is kinda wierd on this. Oddly enough, though, it fits pretty
well.
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