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Baby Will You Miss Me When I'm Gone? Mark Unseen   Apr 5 01:50 UTC 1992

    STANZA

        baby will you miss me when i'm dead and gone?

           dead dead dead
           gone gone gone
        
        baby will you miss me when i'm gone?      gone gone

           will you miss my slothful ways?
           drinking beer and watching tv all the live long days?

        baby will you miss me when i'm gone?      gone gone

           will you miss your couch potato?
           once your stud, now just your spud?
        
        baby will you miss me when i'm gone?      gone gone

    CHORUS

        baby baby baby baby baby
        stud stud stud stud stud
        dead gone dead dead gone
        spud spud spud spud spud

        beer beer beer beer beer
        dead gone stud baby spud
        gone gone bear stud baby
        spud gone baby baby stud

18 responses total.
steve
response 1 of 18: Mark Unseen   Apr 5 04:59 UTC 1992

   Soon to be released on Pink Floyd's new albumn.  Grex gets 3% of sales.
danr
response 2 of 18: Mark Unseen   Apr 5 12:27 UTC 1992

Great! My worries as treasurer are over!
frf
response 3 of 18: Mark Unseen   Apr 7 13:19 UTC 1992

I can't stop my leg...
shannara
response 4 of 18: Mark Unseen   Apr 7 17:58 UTC 1992

which won?
mew
response 5 of 18: Mark Unseen   Apr 14 04:33 UTC 1992

Oh.  I must say that I am moved.
In fact I moved to go get a drink and then re - read this fine
piece of AMerican modern poetry.  wow.  The precise language!
The metaphor, the simile, the slimily!
Ah... writing at it's best.

I especially like the bit about spuds and bears.

I cried.

I give it a 10.
bad
response 6 of 18: Mark Unseen   Apr 15 08:11 UTC 1992

Hast thee no spuds in thine own life?
lnf
response 7 of 18: Mark Unseen   Jul 7 00:39 UTC 1992

ahh o.k. and i thought i wrote wierd!!??
bad
response 8 of 18: Mark Unseen   Jul 29 08:30 UTC 1992

Thou art the basest of pseudos.
Nyah.
carl
response 9 of 18: Mark Unseen   Feb 18 22:06 UTC 1993

Ah, the soul of a sandman sly.
turtle
response 10 of 18: Mark Unseen   Jun 2 22:27 UTC 1994

brilliant
carl
response 11 of 18: Mark Unseen   Jun 3 10:22 UTC 1994

Thank you.  And Marston wasn't bad either.

bjorn
response 12 of 18: Mark Unseen   Oct 13 02:45 UTC 1995

Acrhaic expression.
lee
response 13 of 18: Mark Unseen   May 22 19:05 UTC 1997

Is this how people make their living...? :)
carl
response 14 of 18: Mark Unseen   May 30 19:33 UTC 1997

(actually they don't make it, they just assemble the parts)
orinoco
response 15 of 18: Mark Unseen   Jun 1 18:24 UTC 1997

Their livings are actually made in Taiwan, and then packaged in pieces and
shipped all over the world.  

shib
response 16 of 18: Mark Unseen   Apr 4 12:12 UTC 2000

Hi floks.....
i
response 17 of 18: Mark Unseen   Jun 24 01:34 UTC 2000

There is a secret code concealed in #16 (above).

If you can't read it, don't worry.

If you can read it, Aliens will soon threaten you with wedgies to keep
you from revealing the location of their secret base under the water
tower in Ypsilanti.  Be very afraid....
jaklumen
response 18 of 18: Mark Unseen   May 27 07:38 UTC 2002

Bring it!
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