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remmers
Lit 101 Mark Unseen   Jan 31 18:24 UTC 2003

    Having journeyed far past the ordinary
    I arrived at a vast place where their voices
    (Those of the people who dwelled there)
    Rumbled and echoed like thunder.

    They did not touch me, but their voices did.

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cmcgee
response 1 of 4: Mark Unseen   Feb 7 21:18 UTC 2003

Were they scratchy?
jaklumen
response 2 of 4: Mark Unseen   Feb 9 04:27 UTC 2003

BOOM!
arianna
response 3 of 4: Mark Unseen   May 12 19:49 UTC 2003

(:  I dunno if it was your intention, but the soft "v" sounds are wonderful
to speak when you read this aloud.  The way the consonants assist each other
are really well done, too.
remmers
response 4 of 4: Mark Unseen   May 12 21:22 UTC 2003

Thanks.
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