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remmers
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Lit 101
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Jan 31 18:24 UTC 2003 |
Having journeyed far past the ordinary
I arrived at a vast place where their voices
(Those of the people who dwelled there)
Rumbled and echoed like thunder.
They did not touch me, but their voices did.
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cmcgee
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response 1 of 4:
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Feb 7 21:18 UTC 2003 |
Were they scratchy?
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jaklumen
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response 2 of 4:
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Feb 9 04:27 UTC 2003 |
BOOM!
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arianna
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response 3 of 4:
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May 12 19:49 UTC 2003 |
(: I dunno if it was your intention, but the soft "v" sounds are wonderful
to speak when you read this aloud. The way the consonants assist each other
are really well done, too.
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remmers
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response 4 of 4:
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May 12 21:22 UTC 2003 |
Thanks.
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