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remmers
Waiting Mark Unseen   Jun 22 06:37 UTC 1993

The '48 Studebaker was the color of canned peas.  It was parked illegally,
in front of a fire hydrant.  Nobody seemed to care.

I'd been sitting in the diner across the street, sipping coffee, smoking
Camels, for over an hour now, waiting for a human being to emerge from
somewhere and attach him or herself to the car.  I was the only customer.
Occasionally the counter man would try to make conversation by mumbling
something about the weather or the Dodgers or the Kefauver hearings.
I'd just grunt and let it drop.  My job was to watch the Studebaker.

It couldn't make up it's mind what kind of a day it was going to be.
And I can't make up my mind what kind of story this is going to be.
6 responses total.
rcurl
response 1 of 6: Mark Unseen   Jun 22 14:47 UTC 1993

Eliot Ness
aa8ij
response 2 of 6: Mark Unseen   Jun 23 03:40 UTC 1993

 Travis McGee.

or maybe one of Elmore Leonard's detectives.
aahz
response 3 of 6: Mark Unseen   Jul 4 02:28 UTC 1993

Sounds like a butched version of Tom's Diner
vidar
response 4 of 6: Mark Unseen   Sep 25 19:07 UTC 1993

Ugh.  And other one word phrases.
jett
response 5 of 6: Mark Unseen   Sep 28 10:52 UTC 1993

Never mind all that - continue with the story!!
vidar
response 6 of 6: Mark Unseen   Sep 28 16:36 UTC 1993

Why shouuld we?
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